作业帮关于全球化的英语展示,英文不好求大神修改!
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关于全球化的英语展示,英文不好求大神修改!
帮忙看看稿子中的语法错误或者有无更好的表达方法,
People always think that globalization is equal to Americanization,It is said that "globalization" wearing a Mickey Mouse headphones,drinking Pepsi and Coca-Cola and calculating with windows on IBM.
But nowadays many other countries' culture,science and technology also making difference to the world.All the countries absorb foreign things with their own culture retain,that's the real meaning of globalization.
The States exporting the culture to the world is just equal to China exporting commodties,which is not invasion but means that the world widely agree American culture.that'll help to accelerate the globalizationg
As we all know,the states is the world's economic center,But most of our commodities are made in China,which shows chinese economic status is rising.
I apologize to you for the Iraq war.American also don't want any way,but holp for world peace.
求不被嘲笑- -,
帮忙看看稿子中的语法错误或者有无更好的表达方法,
People always think that globalization is equal to Americanization,It is said that "globalization" wearing a Mickey Mouse headphones,drinking Pepsi and Coca-Cola and calculating with windows on IBM.
But nowadays many other countries' culture,science and technology also making difference to the world.All the countries absorb foreign things with their own culture retain,that's the real meaning of globalization.
The States exporting the culture to the world is just equal to China exporting commodties,which is not invasion but means that the world widely agree American culture.that'll help to accelerate the globalizationg
As we all know,the states is the world's economic center,But most of our commodities are made in China,which shows chinese economic status is rising.
I apologize to you for the Iraq war.American also don't want any way,but holp for world peace.
求不被嘲笑- -,
第一行的逗号改句号.
第二句中globalization作为从句的主语后面直接接wearing,drinking,calculating也有问题.要么加个is,要么把这三个东西改成一般式.
第三句同样问题.
第四句前半句没读懂,不过foreign things这个表示真的很中国=,=
没耐心看完了.我觉得你长句用太多了,从句里还有从句,这个给谁读都会有点吃力的.建议长短句都用用.还有不知道是你这边打错了还是本来就这样,好多句子之间为什么用的是逗号,逗号之后接的是大写字母开头的句子这显然有问题.
第二句中globalization作为从句的主语后面直接接wearing,drinking,calculating也有问题.要么加个is,要么把这三个东西改成一般式.
第三句同样问题.
第四句前半句没读懂,不过foreign things这个表示真的很中国=,=
没耐心看完了.我觉得你长句用太多了,从句里还有从句,这个给谁读都会有点吃力的.建议长短句都用用.还有不知道是你这边打错了还是本来就这样,好多句子之间为什么用的是逗号,逗号之后接的是大写字母开头的句子这显然有问题.