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求:改错10处 It is known that Walt Disney is famous about his Dis

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求:改错10处 It is known that Walt Disney is famous about his Disneyland.
It is known that Walt Disney is famous about his Disneyland.Though he died in 1966,but his friend in Disneyland,such an Mickey Mouse and Donald,will help people remember his name for quite a long time.Disney often takes his daughters to different places,especially interesting parks.It was then when he decided to build a park which both children and adults like it.He said ,"The park I‘ll build must tidy and safe and can attract tourists and make people to come fou its good reputation ."His dream came truly when Disney World opened in California in 1955.There you could find everything you like,Followed it ,Disney parks were appeared in Florida ,Japan and other countries.
第一行 1. about 改成 for 2. but 去掉
第二行 3. such an 中“an”改成 "as"
第四行 4. when 改为 that 5 like it 中 it去掉
第五行 6. tidy前加 "be" 7to come 中to去掉
第六行 8. truly 改为 true
第七行 9. followed 改为following 10. were appeared 中were去掉