作业帮师兄师姐帮我批改一下这篇英文
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师兄师姐帮我批改一下这篇英文
Dear Quiyi
Today is Sunday when second of holiday.Most of the subjects that mathematics,physics and biology are being reviewed for me and what about you?I would like to studing history,politics and geography get along with you.Because of I was idle of take notes at class.What's more,I can help out of questions if you had.
So I want to go your home tomorrow or the day after temorrow.If you approves of my plan,please tells me as soon aspossible.
Best wishes.
Yours
Zhiwei
Dear Quiyi
Today is Sunday when second of holiday.Most of the subjects that mathematics,physics and biology are being reviewed for me and what about you?I would like to studing history,politics and geography get along with you.Because of I was idle of take notes at class.What's more,I can help out of questions if you had.
So I want to go your home tomorrow or the day after temorrow.If you approves of my plan,please tells me as soon aspossible.
Best wishes.
Yours
Zhiwei
修改后的文,是按照澳洲的书信格式.
Dear Qui Yi,(英文中书信的称呼后要用逗号“,”)
（要顶格写,不要空格）Today is Sunday and the second day of the holiday.I am reviewing most of the subjects like mathematics,physics and biology.What about you?Would I study history,politics and geography with you?Because I didn't take notes in the class.While I think we can help each other slove some questions in study.
Therefore,I would like to go to your home to study together tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.I am waiting for your decision.I hope I will receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Zhi Wei
几个问题：正式的英文信件是有严格的格式的,日常信件就没有什么太严格的要求了,如果是学校作业的话,最好还是按照严格的格式来写.
1.开头的称呼：dear Sir/Madam,(如果不知道姓名的话)
Dear Mr./Ms/Miss/Mrs./Dr.+ 姓,（如果有头衔,后面要用姓或是全名）
Dear ###,(如果关系比较好,可以直接用名)
注意：逗号很重要.
2.would like to 后面接动词原形,其实对于英语国家来说,want这个词是不能随便乱用的,因为并不礼貌,有命令的语气,所以最好用like,would like
3.because of 和because
because 后接的是句子,而because of 后要接名词,或是动名词短语
4.介词后一般不能用动词原形.
5.用英语时,要特别注意用语的礼貌,可能在我们看来一样意思的词,实际上有很大语气上和用法上的差别.
格式上可能跟学校里教的不太一样,最早在国内的上学的时候,学的格式也是跟中文作文一样的格式,其实,英语有自己的写作格式,就是开头不空格,每段之间要空一行,这个可以自己选择用哪种格式,毕竟是在国内,最好还是老师让你用什么格式就用什么格式.
Dear Qui Yi,(英文中书信的称呼后要用逗号“,”)
（要顶格写,不要空格）Today is Sunday and the second day of the holiday.I am reviewing most of the subjects like mathematics,physics and biology.What about you?Would I study history,politics and geography with you?Because I didn't take notes in the class.While I think we can help each other slove some questions in study.
Therefore,I would like to go to your home to study together tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.I am waiting for your decision.I hope I will receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Zhi Wei
几个问题：正式的英文信件是有严格的格式的,日常信件就没有什么太严格的要求了,如果是学校作业的话,最好还是按照严格的格式来写.
1.开头的称呼：dear Sir/Madam,(如果不知道姓名的话)
Dear Mr./Ms/Miss/Mrs./Dr.+ 姓,（如果有头衔,后面要用姓或是全名）
Dear ###,(如果关系比较好,可以直接用名)
注意：逗号很重要.
2.would like to 后面接动词原形,其实对于英语国家来说,want这个词是不能随便乱用的,因为并不礼貌,有命令的语气,所以最好用like,would like
3.because of 和because
because 后接的是句子,而because of 后要接名词,或是动名词短语
4.介词后一般不能用动词原形.
5.用英语时,要特别注意用语的礼貌,可能在我们看来一样意思的词,实际上有很大语气上和用法上的差别.
格式上可能跟学校里教的不太一样,最早在国内的上学的时候,学的格式也是跟中文作文一样的格式,其实,英语有自己的写作格式,就是开头不空格,每段之间要空一行,这个可以自己选择用哪种格式,毕竟是在国内,最好还是老师让你用什么格式就用什么格式.
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