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英语达人进,指出下面一段话的错误之处.

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英语达人进,指出下面一段话的错误之处.
I'm a girl come from other city,when I graduated from university,I come suzhou and work in government.I'm a kind-hearted ,positive and optimistic girl.As I'm not native,I have few friends here.So it's difficult for me to find a suitable boyfriend.I hope to find boyfriend who ought to be kind-hearted and well-educated
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I'm a girl come from another city,when I graduated from university,I came to Suzhou and worked in government office.I'm a kind-hearted ,positive and optimistic girl.Because I'm not native,I have few friends here.So it's difficult for me to find a suitable boyfriend.I hope to find boyfriend who is kind-hearted and well-educated
这样就没错了 呵呵交友用的啊?