作业帮帮我修改一下,只是30-40的简单的词.
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帮我修改一下,只是30-40的简单的词.
Date:January 24th,2009 Saturday Weather:Sunny
Today is a terrible but happy day.Maybe you don't understand what me said.But is ture.This afternoon has two things happened.One was wrote a article in my blog.The other was playing badminton.When I wrote a article in my blog,the computer happened Blue Screen of Death.What bad luck!Then I go out to play badminton with my sister.Though the time was a little late,we played very happy.
第一次自己写,虽然差了点,不过应该会慢慢进步的吧.希望大家指出错误,
Date:January 24th,2009 Saturday Weather:Sunny
Today is a terrible but happy day.Maybe you don't understand what me said.But is ture.This afternoon has two things happened.One was wrote a article in my blog.The other was playing badminton.When I wrote a article in my blog,the computer happened Blue Screen of Death.What bad luck!Then I go out to play badminton with my sister.Though the time was a little late,we played very happy.
第一次自己写,虽然差了点,不过应该会慢慢进步的吧.希望大家指出错误,
日期：2009年1月24日星期六天气：阳光
今天是一个可怕的,但高兴day.Maybe你不明白我said.But是ture.This下午happened.One有两件事写了一篇文章是在我blog.The其他打得badminton.When我写了文章我的博客,电脑出现蓝屏Death.What坏运气!然后我出去玩羽毛球我sister.Though的时间有点晚了,我们踢得非常高兴.
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今天是一个可怕的,但高兴day.Maybe你不明白我said.But是ture.This下午happened.One有两件事写了一篇文章是在我blog.The其他打得badminton.When我写了文章我的博客,电脑出现蓝屏Death.What坏运气!然后我出去玩羽毛球我sister.Though的时间有点晚了,我们踢得非常高兴.
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