作业帮有人能帮我修改一下语法错误么,根据原文的意思修改
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有人能帮我修改一下语法错误么,根据原文的意思修改
on June 13,2014,INTEVA Basketball AssociationBasketball invited the PATAC basketball team and STEC basketball team to carryout a basketball match in Shanghai Second Polytechnic University stadium.Finally under the fierce competition,STEC basketball team with excellentteamwork and skillful tactics to get the final champion,the PATAC basketballteam captain GuoYang with the excellent personal ability to win the MVP.
Leaders who attended the match was the bodyexterior Director Mr Zhou,SDADS general manager Mr Lu and executive directorMr Zhang ,Mr Lu presided over the opening ceremony,emphasized the importanceof establishing new type of the whole-zero relations,and to encourage theathletes to strengthen cooperation and jointly a world-class high-quality goodsdoor system.
The collaboration Cup basketball game for employees not only enrichthe lives of amateur sports,but also show us the youthful all participatingpersonnel.In the future,we will continue to enrich their cultural and sportslife of employees for the purpose of strengthening mutual cooperation betweenthe various systems.We will organize more and better communication activitiesto promote the building of enterprise culture.
on June 13,2014,INTEVA Basketball AssociationBasketball invited the PATAC basketball team and STEC basketball team to carryout a basketball match in Shanghai Second Polytechnic University stadium.Finally under the fierce competition,STEC basketball team with excellentteamwork and skillful tactics to get the final champion,the PATAC basketballteam captain GuoYang with the excellent personal ability to win the MVP.
Leaders who attended the match was the bodyexterior Director Mr Zhou,SDADS general manager Mr Lu and executive directorMr Zhang ,Mr Lu presided over the opening ceremony,emphasized the importanceof establishing new type of the whole-zero relations,and to encourage theathletes to strengthen cooperation and jointly a world-class high-quality goodsdoor system.
The collaboration Cup basketball game for employees not only enrichthe lives of amateur sports,but also show us the youthful all participatingpersonnel.In the future,we will continue to enrich their cultural and sportslife of employees for the purpose of strengthening mutual cooperation betweenthe various systems.We will organize more and better communication activitiesto promote the building of enterprise culture.
主要问题是时态、数、语序等,直接改了,尽量保持原貌.
On June 13,2014,invited by INTEVA Basketball Association,the PATAC basketball team,STEC basketball team and the INTEVA held a basketball match in Shanghai Second Polytechnic University stadium.Finally under fierce competitions,STEC basketball team got the final champion with their excellent teamwork and skillful tactics,and GuoYang from the PATAC basketballteam captain won the MVP owing to his excellent personal ability.
Leaders who attended the match were the bodyexterior Director Mr Zhou,SDADS general manager Mr Lu and executive director,Mr Zhang.Mr Lu presided over the opening ceremony,emphasizing the importance of establishing new type of the whole-zero relations,and to encourage the athletes to strengthen cooperation and jointly a world-class high-quality goodsdoor system.
The collaboration Cup basketball game for employees not only enriches the lives of amateur sports,but also shows us the youthful all participating personnel.In the future,we will continue to enrich our cultural and sports life of employees for the purpose of strengthening mutual cooperation between various systems.We will organize more and better communication activities to promote the building of enterprise culture.
On June 13,2014,invited by INTEVA Basketball Association,the PATAC basketball team,STEC basketball team and the INTEVA held a basketball match in Shanghai Second Polytechnic University stadium.Finally under fierce competitions,STEC basketball team got the final champion with their excellent teamwork and skillful tactics,and GuoYang from the PATAC basketballteam captain won the MVP owing to his excellent personal ability.
Leaders who attended the match were the bodyexterior Director Mr Zhou,SDADS general manager Mr Lu and executive director,Mr Zhang.Mr Lu presided over the opening ceremony,emphasizing the importance of establishing new type of the whole-zero relations,and to encourage the athletes to strengthen cooperation and jointly a world-class high-quality goodsdoor system.
The collaboration Cup basketball game for employees not only enriches the lives of amateur sports,but also shows us the youthful all participating personnel.In the future,we will continue to enrich our cultural and sports life of employees for the purpose of strengthening mutual cooperation between various systems.We will organize more and better communication activities to promote the building of enterprise culture.