作业帮帮我检查一下这几句话有没有写错.
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帮我检查一下这几句话有没有写错.
When I went home with my bag,I saw a child crying in the steet.
要表达的要点:我背着书包回家,看见一个小孩在路边哭.
He told me he wasn't find his mother.
要表达的要点:他告诉我他找不到妈妈了.
And he can't say where his house is.Becouse he is too young.
因为他年龄太小,他说不出他家的地址.
Then I put on the picture book and read with him.
我拿出图画书和他一起看.
I also tell him some story.
给他讲故事.
And wait his mother with him.
陪他等妈妈.
30 minutes later,he was crying again.
半小时后他又哭了,我给他买了写橘子
After that,his mother came here,and she thanks me .
这时候他妈妈来找他了,并向我表示感谢.
When I went home with my bag,I saw a child crying in the steet.
要表达的要点:我背着书包回家,看见一个小孩在路边哭.
He told me he wasn't find his mother.
要表达的要点:他告诉我他找不到妈妈了.
And he can't say where his house is.Becouse he is too young.
因为他年龄太小,他说不出他家的地址.
Then I put on the picture book and read with him.
我拿出图画书和他一起看.
I also tell him some story.
给他讲故事.
And wait his mother with him.
陪他等妈妈.
30 minutes later,he was crying again.
半小时后他又哭了,我给他买了写橘子
After that,his mother came here,and she thanks me .
这时候他妈妈来找他了,并向我表示感谢.
你是写英语作文吧,帮你修改了下
When I was going back home,I saw a child crying at the side of the road.He told me that he couldn't find his mother,and he was too young to tell his address.In order to wait for his mother,I took out my picture book and we read it together.I also told him some interesting stories to make him happy.Half an hour later,he began to cry again.Seeing this,I brought some oranges for him and he liked them very much.At that moment,his mother came in a hurry and thanked me a lot for my kindness.
When I was going back home,I saw a child crying at the side of the road.He told me that he couldn't find his mother,and he was too young to tell his address.In order to wait for his mother,I took out my picture book and we read it together.I also told him some interesting stories to make him happy.Half an hour later,he began to cry again.Seeing this,I brought some oranges for him and he liked them very much.At that moment,his mother came in a hurry and thanked me a lot for my kindness.