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短文改错Last year,my Dad got a new job.It was intow which were 1

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Last year,my Dad got a new job.It was intow which were 100kms from our home .Mum and Dad decided we would have to move,because it was the long way for Dad to travel it every day. When they told their plan for me l became upset because l loved home and school.l was worried that l will town.The house is much big than our our old one,and from my bedroomwimdow lcan see the sea.The teachers in my new school are nice but I have made many newfriends.Move house isn't that bad,after all!
.l was worried that l will miss all my friends and teachers a lot.Anyway,six month after that,my family moved to the town..The house is much big than our our old one,and from my bedroom window l can see the sea.The teachers in my new school are nice but I have made many new friends.Move house isn't that bad,after all!
Last year, my Dad got a new job. It was intow (in a town) which were (was) 100kms (100km) from our home. Mum and Dad decided (decided that) we would have to move, because it was the (a) long way for Dad to travel it (-) every day (everyday). When they told their plan for (to) me l (I) became upset because l (I) loved (my) home and school (the school). l (I) was worried that l (I) will (would miss the) town. The house is (was) much big (bigger) than our old one, and from my bedroom wimdow (window) lcan (I could) see the sea. The teachers in my new school are (were) nice but (and) I have (-) made many new friends. Move (Moving) house isn't that bad, after all!