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这篇英语作文语法顺序对不对 如 注:已去过
Going to the zoo
I want to the zoo.There had many animals.
First,I saw zebra.It was exciting.Next,I climbed Monkey mountain.It was tiring.
Then,I saw lions.It was frightening.After that,I saw panda.It was interesting.I very like panda.
A Trip to the Zoo (原题目不妥哈)
Last weekend,I went to the zoo.(这里估计LZ是打错字了,去动物园用go的过去式went,want是想要的意思了)
There were many animals.(这里用there be的句型,表示某地有某物)
First,I went to see zebras.(zebra是可数名词,不能以单数形式单独存在,即是要么用它的复数,要么前面加冠词才行.这里选择用名词复数形式,表示一类事物)
I went ot climb to the monkey mountain.(猴山前面要加the)
I saw pandas.(这里也是要用复数,表一类事物)
I like pandas very much/ a lot.(表示非常喜欢,very much或是a lot要放后面,不能放like前面哈.)
再问: First, I went to see zebras【see不用过去式吗】. (zebra是可数名词,不能以单数形式单独存在,即是要么用它的复数,要么前面加冠词才行。这里选择用名词复数形式,表示一类事物)
再答: 亲,你仔细看下,我改了你的句子了哦。这里我用了go to do sth,是过去式,所以go变went了,成了went to see...哈
再问: 请回答一下go to do sth是什么 (我无知了)
再答: go to do sth就是去做什么事情呀,字面上的事情哦。你是要在动物园里逛,想说先去看了什么,再看了什么之类的,对吧?那么我觉得第一个看还是加上方向动词go更加生动些哦,也可以避免句子过短,还有就是重复太多次同一句型。