作业帮谁能把这篇英语作文改得有深度些?
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谁能把这篇英语作文改得有深度些?
Hello!Everyone!My Chinese name is Chen Kaiyan.And My English name is Melody.I was born on April 24th,1996.I am a girl of 13 years old.I am a student in junior 2 of Jiangmen No.2 Middle School.I like shopping,listening to music and playing computer games.My favourite subject is English.My idol is Super Junior from Korea.I like Korean culture very much.I have always wanted to visit Korea.And I like to eat chocolate very much.
改得像高中作文..
我觉得我写得太幼稚了.
我要用来参加演讲..
Hello!Everyone!My Chinese name is Chen Kaiyan.And My English name is Melody.I was born on April 24th,1996.I am a girl of 13 years old.I am a student in junior 2 of Jiangmen No.2 Middle School.I like shopping,listening to music and playing computer games.My favourite subject is English.My idol is Super Junior from Korea.I like Korean culture very much.I have always wanted to visit Korea.And I like to eat chocolate very much.
改得像高中作文..
我觉得我写得太幼稚了.
我要用来参加演讲..
Hello!Everyone!I am Chen Kaiyan ,you can also call me Melody as well.I am a girl of 13 years old ,who was born on April 24th,1996.I am educated in junior 2 of Jiangmen No.2 Middle School.I am fond of listening to music as well as playing computer games.Although it is bad to eat too much chocalate,I like doing so.My favourite subject is English.Super Junior from Korea is the band which I am crazy for .Since I like Korean culture very much,I am looking forward to visiting Korea some day.