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Recently,it is reported that more than 80 percent of operations have been put off as the result of lack of blood,even,some hospitals can not supply blood to take an operation,in this situation,lack of blood is regarded as reaching a most serious level in ten years.
Now,netizens are talking about short of blood,because it has spread everywhere,nevertheless,most of them intend to know why it is free to donate and charge for your using,in the situation,the hospital are making money by free blood and sell to people who are serious to take operation,so,it is extremely unfair for blood donators and users.
As far as I am concerned,free donated and charge for using is unreasonable,as donators,they donate their blood for free and just get a paper which could only prove that you have donated,as users,they are urgent to take an operation to solve some difficulties,and they can only pay for the blood finally,so we could cancel the rule of pay for blood if it is feasible.

Recently,it is reported that more than 80 percent of operations have been put off as a result of a lack of blood.What's worse,some hospitals are not able to supply enough for an operation,in this situation,lack of blood is expected to reach a most serious level in 10 years.
Now,there has been a heated discussion among netizens about the blood shortage,because of its wide spread.What's more,most of them are questioning about its free donation yet charged usage.Under this circumstance,the hospital is making money out of the free blood and sell it to people who are severe enough to have an operation.后面挺好
再问：我写的怎么样啊，在批改网上没显示分数，晕啊，ps本人大一，非英语专业
再答：挺好的，但是有些说法的表达方式有欠缺。上了大学，非英语专业的还这么认真，少见啊。。。
再问：额，我也觉的，自己先在脑子里把中文想好，然后在组句子，所以每句话都很长，但看你写的感觉不同，怎么提高呢？而且，有些单词我知道意思，就是不会用，也不敢用，是单词没背熟吗？
再答：背诵再多单词，如果不知道准确用法也白扯，可是好多时候单词在句子上的用法很多，表达的意思也会有不同。这种情况就需要多积累，多看多用。在娱乐中学习记忆会比较深，你可以看看美剧，注意他们是怎么用的不同的。加油吧！！
再问：走遍美国还是老友记还是大爆炸啊？

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