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帮忙检查下今天的日记Dec.5th Sunday SunnyIt was a sunny winter day,I we

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帮忙检查下今天的日记
Dec.5th Sunday Sunny
It was a sunny winter day,I went to the library of the nationality university for individual study with my friends.There were many students studying in this library,so it was a bit stuffy.However,the library was well-ordered.We spent a whole day to learn except the lunch time.Then we gathered together for our dinner in their dormitory.There were four dishes,and each one was delicious especially Stewed Chicken with Mushroom(蘑菇).After dinner,I came back home,chatted online with a old friends of mine,who was working in Nanjing.umm,it's time to go to bed for me now.Good night,sleep tight!
1. "nationality" -- "national"
2. "spend a whole day to learn" --- "spend a whole day learning"
3. "except" -- "except for"
4. "Then we gathered together for our dinner in their dormitory." 中的”their"指代不明.
5."each one was" --- " all were"
6. "a old friends" --- "an old friend"
7. "was" -- "is"