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Good Qualities in Students No matter where we are,there are always many good students around us. We can follow their examples to learn the good qualities. Good qualities in students has many kinds, passion. perseuerance. honesty. responsibility and self discipline and so on. And in my opinion , I think honesty is the most important among them. Even though a student has a pretty good grade in exams, but he is dishonest , so in our view he isn’t a good student. Be honest , you must do these points as follow. Firstly , don’t lie to other people . Secondly , don’t copy others’ homework . Lastly , be serious to your own life . In a nutshell , please be honest to each other and you will be better in other’s view .
这是天津市河西区一模考试！~原题是让学生论述作为好学生身上的应该具备的好品质，并挑一点论述。满分为25分，麻烦老师帮忙看看应该能够得多少分！应有哪些改进的，帮忙修改一下，~~谢谢哦！~~~~

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Good qualities in students has many kinds, passion. perseuerance. honesty. responsibility and self discipline and so on.（第一句话写得不错，且没有错误） And in my opinion , I think honesty is the most important（最好在这里加一个词one，这样呢比较通顺一些） among them. Even though a student has a pretty good grade in （加一个冠词the）exams, but he is dishonest , so in our view he isn’t a good student.(这句话也可以) Be honest , you must do these points as follow（这里的错误就比较严重了，属于非谓语动词类的错误，应改为：Being honest, you must do these points as follow）. Firstly , don’t lie to other people . Secondly , don’t copy others’ homework . Lastly, be serious to your own life(这里的几句写得也不错，层次比较清晰) .
In a nutshell , please be honest to each other and you will be better in other’s view . （最后一段的总结写得也不错，简短而有力。）得分：16分。
最终答案：略

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