作业帮帮我修改下英语日记（简单）...
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帮我修改下英语日记（简单）...
我写的大概是中国英语- -我的英语真的好差~指出错误之处.跪...
How terrible the day is!Today,Mrs Wang said,after a few days,we will have a big exam.Many classmates screamed:"NO!I can't endure it!"I want to crying,because I have to study all day,I can't play comeputer games,and I can't go shopping with my friends ,either.
And this day,I heared the news and I can't believe it.The news that A is a gay by B.I really don't believe!I think it's a joke,but is not I don't know how to speak my mind.
I have too much homework to write a lot.
那个，不好意思，我没有说清楚
The news that A is a gay by 这句的意思是，B说A是一个同性恋者~
我已经对英语不报希望了~
PS我不会说“期中考试”，就用了a big exam代替~
我根据大家的意见这样修改了一下~请帮忙看看还有错误么？
How terrible today is!（我比较习惯用HOW，不大习惯用WHAT）
In the afternoon,Mrs Wang said we would have a middle-term examinaton a few days later.Many of my classmates screamed:"NO!I can't endure it!"I wanted to cry because that meant from now on,I must study day and night,and I could't play my favourite comeputer games,and I even could't go shopping with my friends ,either.（我不知道该用can't还是用could't）
However,at the same day,I heared a piece of news and I could't believe my ears.The news is that B told me A is a gay.I can't believe it!I think it's a joke,but in fact it is not I don't know how to express my feelings.
I have a lot of homework to write.（最后一句的意思是，所以不能写很多了（指日记）。
我写的大概是中国英语- -我的英语真的好差~指出错误之处.跪...
How terrible the day is!Today,Mrs Wang said,after a few days,we will have a big exam.Many classmates screamed:"NO!I can't endure it!"I want to crying,because I have to study all day,I can't play comeputer games,and I can't go shopping with my friends ,either.
And this day,I heared the news and I can't believe it.The news that A is a gay by B.I really don't believe!I think it's a joke,but is not I don't know how to speak my mind.
I have too much homework to write a lot.
那个，不好意思，我没有说清楚
The news that A is a gay by 这句的意思是，B说A是一个同性恋者~
我已经对英语不报希望了~
PS我不会说“期中考试”，就用了a big exam代替~
我根据大家的意见这样修改了一下~请帮忙看看还有错误么？
How terrible today is!（我比较习惯用HOW，不大习惯用WHAT）
In the afternoon,Mrs Wang said we would have a middle-term examinaton a few days later.Many of my classmates screamed:"NO!I can't endure it!"I wanted to cry because that meant from now on,I must study day and night,and I could't play my favourite comeputer games,and I even could't go shopping with my friends ,either.（我不知道该用can't还是用could't）
However,at the same day,I heared a piece of news and I could't believe my ears.The news is that B told me A is a gay.I can't believe it!I think it's a joke,but in fact it is not I don't know how to express my feelings.
I have a lot of homework to write.（最后一句的意思是，所以不能写很多了（指日记）。
What a terrible day!
Today,Mrs Wang said we would have the Term Exam a few days later. Many of my classmates screamed:"NO!I can't endure it!"I wanted to cry because that meant from now on, I must study day and night; I can't play anymore of my favourite comeputer games and I can't even go shopping with my friends either.However, It was so unbelievable when I heard a gossip today, guy B told me that Guy B is gay! I can't believe it! I wish it was only a joke but in fact it was true! I don't know what to say anymore!
I have too much homework to do.
楼上修改的有错误, mean的过去式是meant. 不是meaned
还有几处语句太中国英文式了. 呵呵
我已经按照你的补充给改好了, 这是最终版本.
你英文还可以了,加油啊
Today,Mrs Wang said we would have the Term Exam a few days later. Many of my classmates screamed:"NO!I can't endure it!"I wanted to cry because that meant from now on, I must study day and night; I can't play anymore of my favourite comeputer games and I can't even go shopping with my friends either.However, It was so unbelievable when I heard a gossip today, guy B told me that Guy B is gay! I can't believe it! I wish it was only a joke but in fact it was true! I don't know what to say anymore!
I have too much homework to do.
楼上修改的有错误, mean的过去式是meant. 不是meaned
还有几处语句太中国英文式了. 呵呵
我已经按照你的补充给改好了, 这是最终版本.
你英文还可以了,加油啊