有关服装外贸的翻译,急需!分数不是很多,但是希望能帮帮我!

有关服装外贸的翻译,急需!分数不是很多,但是希望能帮帮我!
Pls. see below & attach for 1st proto comments and arrange to proceed the 2nd proto (2pcs) asap, thanks!
Since here so many fitting problem on it, and we ask the customer if they can send paper pattern again for double checking, will keep you post!

Design:

Not Approved

Comment:

2nd Vivi 2153 111 131

Thank you for 1st proto.
Pls follow comments below and pls proceed wth 2nd proto :

Pls note we find it really hard to recognize the pattern we sent. Fit is bad on proto and it isn´t at original made from same pattern. I wonder what happen?
Anyway pls follow comments below carefully:

1. Pls note fit balance is really bad..both front and back is pointing out.
Pls see photo 1 and 2
2. Pls correct fit balance.
It seam to me that front length is missing at shoulder = more shl slanting at front, to make front falling down straight. Pls advise according to pattern
Back is pointing out..pls avoid and pls advise according to pattern
Pls also note bulking at back. Pls avoid bulking
Both above issues are not a problem at original following pattern sent!
3. Then sleeve fit / sleeve sewing is too bad. Pls see photo 5 and 6
Photo 5 of original, with a nice sleeve and
photo 6 of proto, with a bad sleeve.
Pls improve sleeve
4. Pls make shoulder across 39 cm
5. Pls reduce sleeve length by 4 cm
6. Pls reshape sleeve head at back according to photo7. At cutlines..pls remove 1.3 cm and pls reshape
7. Pls make½ upper sleeve width = 16 cm, to follow original/pattern (proto has an ½ upper sleeve on 17,5 cm)
8. Pls add sleevehead pad/roll, for more tailored look
9. Pls note we found shoulder pad too soft..pls use one a bit harder for more stiff hold
10. Pls make collar lapel symmetric. Right is nice..left is not. Pls improve
11. Pls make collar/lapel nicely..in shape, sharp lines and in sewing
12. Regarding collar/lapel:
Pls reduce collar point by 1 cm
Pls reduce lapel width by 0,5 cm and
Pls move cutline 0,5 cm in
Pls see photo 8
13. Pls remove dart under collar. At pattern there should be no dart and fit on original is fine!
14. Pls attach folded part of lapel at bottomseam..sewn in between layers
15. Pls make lining/facing inside according to photo 4.
16. Pls attach fringes in between layers and pls note no topstitches to keep fringes
17. Pls make double layer fringes
18. Pls make separate collarstand for more fitted collar
19. Pls assure collar hiding neck line
20. Pls drop neckdrop CB 1 cm
21. Pls remove CB neck facing

这个批办验货没通过
1尺寸跟原版差了很多 2肩线太靠前衣服歪掉了
3 袖片装的太烂了,参考图5、6 图5是做好的袖片
4 肩宽做39cm
5 袖长减4cm
6 根据图7重做袖头 cutline可能是指中线吧不太清楚
7 袖宽做窄了 原版是17.5x2 从中间量
8 袖圈做的平整一点
9 肩膀做的也不好看
10 翻领做的不对称 左边的不对
11 领子做的好看点 注意车线
12 领口点再缩1cm 翻领宽缩0.5cm （你看图8 他说的不是很清楚）
13 领子下面不要打褶

太多了.你还要吗 不要我不翻了
说一句你们这个衣服做的真是= =
再问： 要得要得，求你继续
再答： 14 这个不太懂 翻领下摆的折线地方有问题 反正也是叫你们做得好看点
15 对比图4 里衬再做一下
16 你们出的样衣 在有层次部分都没有车线 意思可能是叫你们压线 你那个衣服我看不到 不知道具体什么意思
17 要包边
18 领座分开点 跟领子贴合起来
19 领子要遮住领口线
后面两个不知道 也是领的问题

这个应该是验货方的报告
他说会请客人再发一份资料给你们
你们只要照着资料做样衣就行
验货员就是给你个参考

第二点是前肩线没做上 衣服往前掉
再问： 所以1st proto在这里的意思是1号样衣的意思吗
再答： 对的亲～ 祝你们下次验货成功