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短文改错,快hi,Susan. I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return to yo

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短文改错,快
hi,Susan.
I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return to your bike on time yesterday.I mean to give it back to you immediate I used it.And I was hold up on my way back.A little boy was taking the corner while a truck cut in.He got injured and needed timely help. So I helped rush him to the nearest hospital.I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the boy were all right.I got back very late.Still I think it worthwhile.I wish you can understand.
Thankyou!
hi,Susan.
I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return (to多余去掉) your bike on time yesterday.I (mean改为wanted) to give it back to you (immediate加ly)(加after) I used it.(And改为But )I was hold up on my way back.A little boy was taking the corner (while改为when) a truck cut in.He got injured and needed timely help.So I helped rush him to the nearest hospital.I stayed (here改为there) for one and a half (hour加s) and made sure that the boy (were改为was) all right.I got back very late.(Still改为But) I think it worthwhile.I (wish改为hope) you can understand.
Thank you!