帮我写一个2到3分钟的小Topic 的评论

帮我写一个2到3分钟的小Topic 的评论
题目是“Do you think people in your country have enough time to relax and pursue their hobbies? Why or why not?”只需做两到三分钟的评论,万分感谢!（用英文写,不需要很难）

Most people usually want to make big money which is human nature.Actually Taiwanese don’t have too much time for relaxing themselves,and I’m one of them.In other hand,most Taiwanese give up to pursue their hobbies.
Taiwan is a busy country.People usually walk fast and try to squeeze out their time to done with more jobs that seems time never enough.The only relax of those people are sleep and taking shower; the maximum of all they could do which are watching TV and reading couple pages of a book.Most Taiwanese want to make more money while they still young.They want to save money to buy everything they need in future life,so most people have education for making money,and saving money for the sunset of life.This is most human’s pathetically life about pursuing their rest life,and I’m the one who can’t get away with it.
I think have pets is most popular activity for leisure time in Taiwan,but where is the money for having pets come from?People want to enjoy their hobbies that should spend money and time on it.In other word they should able to earn easy money,thus most Taiwanese don’t want to earn more money then spend time on their hobbies.
Actually I don’t have enough time to have leisure activity,because I am a transfer student,so I have to make-up lot of credits that I didn’t have.In other word I have to spend all my time to take courses on freshman and deal with my paper and home work.The only way I relaxed myself that was listening music,especially when I work with my school work and before sleep.
People should keep time for relaxing themselves because it can keep pressure away and it is healthy to them.