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Summer holiday is coming. How excited! I have made a plan for my summer holiday. First of all, I will go to Hong Kong to visit my aunt. And then I will stay with her for a while. As Hong Kong is the shopping paradise, of course, I will ask my aunt to go shopping with me. I will also eat the delicious food there. And then I will go home. I know that study comes first. So I will finish my homework first. After that I will go out play with my friends. And then I will take a good rest to prepare for my new school term.
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1 文章正确运用了"be doing" will + 动词原形两种一般将来时的表达方式,是文章富于变化,同时也体现了较强的语言驾驭能力。
2 在 how excited后加What are you going to do this vacation?开门见山的提出了这个假期的计划。
3 短文中可以适当用for example, look forward to 等词来增添文章的亮点。
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最终答案:略