作业帮帮我看下这个英语作文写的有没有问题?可以怎么修改?
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帮我看下这个英语作文写的有没有问题?可以怎么修改?
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Your friend Li Ming has written to invited you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.
Write a reply to Li Ming
1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation
2.to ask about his schedule for the trip
3.to ask about what necessary preparations you need to make.
You should write approximately 100 words.Do not sign your name at the end of your letter.Use "wang Lin" instead.You do not need to write the address.
下面是我写的：（请各位大侠帮我看看）
Dear Li Ming:
\x05Thanks for you invited me to you hometown,I'm looking forward to go there since I had head all your hometown from yours,How long will you plan to go there?I hope we can stay one week,Most of the interesting things I want to try.Pls tell me the schedule for the trip as soon as you decided,what necessary goods we need to arrange before we go there?I'm no idea for this things,i plan to take some special local products for your family,any advices for me?I'm can't wait to go there,Hope to receive you letter!
yours wang Lin
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Your friend Li Ming has written to invited you to go to his hometown together with him and you are willing to accept his invitation.
Write a reply to Li Ming
1.to express your appreciation and acceptance of his invitation
2.to ask about his schedule for the trip
3.to ask about what necessary preparations you need to make.
You should write approximately 100 words.Do not sign your name at the end of your letter.Use "wang Lin" instead.You do not need to write the address.
下面是我写的：（请各位大侠帮我看看）
Dear Li Ming:
\x05Thanks for you invited me to you hometown,I'm looking forward to go there since I had head all your hometown from yours,How long will you plan to go there?I hope we can stay one week,Most of the interesting things I want to try.Pls tell me the schedule for the trip as soon as you decided,what necessary goods we need to arrange before we go there?I'm no idea for this things,i plan to take some special local products for your family,any advices for me?I'm can't wait to go there,Hope to receive you letter!
yours wang Lin
looking forward to go 应在go后加ing固定短语,Most of 最好改为all of;I'm no idea 应该为I have no
I'm can't 应该为I can not不可加am;
I'm can't 应该为I can not不可加am;
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