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Today I want to talk my hobbywith us.

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Today I want to talk my hobbywith us.
Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.Some one may say watching anime is awaste of time and kind of naive thing,but I don't think so.In fact,I can learn a lot fromwatching anime.
For example,that the animetaught me never give up and it helps me have confidence.
It also told us to learn to believe friends and make us beoutgoing.Such as Bleach,Naruto,natsume yuujinchou.
I like the person in the anime too.Because they aremore stronger and warmer than the real people.They always respect theirenemy.And the best emotion is showed in the anime.
Watching anime make me feel better in my true life.Because another world is morecleaning and true.
In a word,I love anime what a best thing in my heart.是自己写的,要背下来做Eglish reporte,看看有没有错误
这个是我个人意见.
首先,第一段的with us没有多大必要,这要的表达也不对
第二段的1.Watching anime is one of the favorite things I like to do.(do 改成doing)
2.Some one may say watching anime is (a waste of time)(这里改成wasting time) and (+个a) kind of naive thing,
3.I can learn a lot (+of things)from watching anime.
4.It also told us (+how)to learn to believe friends and make us beoutgoing.
5.Because they are more(不要more) stronger and warmer than the real people
6.Watching anime make(makes) me feel better in my true life.
7.Because another(换成the anime‘s) world is morecleaning and true.
不管怎么说,这样打好辛苦的!