SAT作文求批改prompt:DO people learn more from examing event in th

SAT作文求批改
prompt:DO people learn more from examing event in the past than from focusing only on present.
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In this fast-pace world,everthing develops more promptly than ever.within a few minutes,many technologies might supplant by another one.people invent new products alomost every seconds.Every new inventions are improved by the old.We absords the mistakes from false and develop the more safty,more powerful technologies.We learn a lot from the tragedy in the sapcecraft Columbus and the wrong theory of helicentric.
In 1990s,America expected a new information that might gain from the astronout if the spacecraft Columbus worked sucessfully.unfortunely,it broke apart on the way back to Earth.that is a tragedy.but it stimulated the scientist to investigate the caft carefully.there are some serious problem that they did not discoveries until the tragedy happened.Even american suffered such painful event,they work so hard to reasearch amd test their machines.the tragdy would not happen again.we learn more from examing even to prevent us from dangerous.
there is another people who is founder father of comology.Even his theory was proved that is incorred.but he provide the grreat idea to help the modern cosology.He is Noclus Copernuis.He is well-konwn doctor and comologist.he learn the everthing on his own without taking any class.he passed his unique helicentric theory.it is new idea and nobady wanted to believe.when the world became more and more progressive.Scientist published the correct theory based on his idea.without him,people will never step out to test such mysterious universe.
above all,we have to notice that present is less important than past.all the cultures scatter around the world are coming from past,without the summary from our acentors.we can not be successful.

In this fast-pace world,everthing develops more promptly than ever.within a few minutes,many technologies might be supplanted by others.people invent new products almost every second.New inventions are improved by the old.We absords the mistakes from falsity and develop the more safty,more powerful technologies.We learn a lot from the tragedy in the sapcecraft Columbus and the wrong theory of helicentric.
In 1990s,Americans expected a piece of new information that might gain from the astronout if the spacecraft Columbus worked sucessfully.unfortunely,it broke apart on the way back to Earth.that is a tragedy.but it stimulated the scientists to investigate the caft carefully.there were some serious problems that they did not discovery until the tragedy happened.Even American suffered such a painful event,they work so hard to reasearch and test their machines.the tragdy would not happen again.we can even protect us from dangers.
.Even the theory of the founder father of comology was proved to be incorrect.but he provided the great idea to help the modern cosology.He is Noclus Copernuis.He is a well-kn own doctor and comologist.he learnt the everthing on his own without taking any classes.he passed his unique helicentric theory.it is a new idea and nobady would believe.when the world became more and more progressive.Scientists published the corrected the theory based on his idea.without him,people would have steped out to test such mysterious universe in a longer time.
above all,we have to notice that present is less important than the past.all the cultures scatter around the world are coming from the past,without the summary from our acentors.we could not be successful.