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评改四级作文语法错误It's so freedom studying in camus!Now some univers

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评改四级作文语法错误
It's so freedom studying in camus!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more chances to make decisions on their study.
When students select their lecturers,they will try their best to search every chips of lecturers' information.Is the lecturera master in his/her specialty?What does his/her study point?Besides what mentioned above,students usually think about utilitarian questions like whether the lecturer gives high scores and so on.
Without doubting,campus students selecting lecturers will gibe more chances to them find a lecturer who is suit themselves because everyone's characteristic and study style are different.However,it may lead to problem that some students may only focus on the utilitarian factors.
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It's so【 freedom--free前面有缩略词is,表明此处用形容词】 【studying------to study】 in 【camus--campus打错】!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more 【chances—chance表示“可能性”经常用单数】to make decisions on their study.
When students select their lecturers,they will try their best to search every chips of 【加the或their】lecturers' information.Is the lecturer【加a】 master in his/her specialty?What does his/her study point?Besides what【have been (what从句谓语动词不全面,该是被动语态】 mentioned above,students usually think about utilitarian questions like whether the lecturer gives high scores and so on.
Without 【doubting--dout直接可以用作名词】,campus students selecting lecturers will 【gibe--give】 more chances (表示“机遇”可以不改,用复数)to them find a lecturer who is 【suit——suitable】【for】 themselves because everyone's characteristic and study style are different.However,it may lead to 【加such】【problems】【 that——as 】some students may only focus on the utilitarian factors.【原来语法并不错,只是整体表达效果没有改动后更充分】