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因为口试要用,所以请大家看看有米有语法错.

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因为口试要用,所以请大家看看有米有语法错.
可以的话帮忙扩到10句左右.
发发慈悲吧,偶后天考啊!
1、 my hobby
I like listening to the music during leisure time.Listening to the music can refresh myself.I like pop music best.I think it’s fantastic.It can make me happy.When you are unhappy or you are tired ,listen to the music then you will feel comfy.When you hear the nice voice,you must be as fresh as paint.That’s my hobby.
2、a place in Shanghai
Yu Garden is one of the most popular places in Shanghai.There are many people there at weekends.Because they wants to buy some things in a low price.There are many special things such as funny hats and different kinds of chopsticks.The snacks there is also very famous.Lots of foreigners likes to eat spring rolls and wonton .They’re delicious.
2、 sports
My favorite sport is running.Running is good for our health.You can run 1 or 2 kilometers in the morning.Then you will feel peppy.Some times later,you will have a strong will.On a P.E.lesson,you must have a running test and you can get a high mark.
第一段后面应用l,怎么用you了?
第二段,第二行,应是they want,want后面没有s的.第二段最后一行应是foreigners like,like后面没s.
补充一下,一般现在时,主语是三单形式,谓语动词才加s,懂不,孩子?