作业帮（急）高手帮忙改英文作文!
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（急）高手帮忙改英文作文!
怎样可以post更多字上来啊？？？
要改的：请帮改文法，把词语变得更好.....
Firstly, the government should improve the welfare of the grassroots to alleviate the gap between the rich and the poor. The current welfare policies made by the government, such as the reduction of public housing rents, electricity bills and the release of additional CSSA payments, although the solution of the poor meet the urgent needs of little help, but the long-term but then out of poverty. Therefore, the government should change its land policy to build more public housing and public housing, and provide the public with basic housing needs. In addition, the government should implement a universal retirement protection, long-term preparation for the public, and adjusted upwards the amount of the minimum wage will help to enhance the income of the lower class.
怎样可以post更多字上来啊？？？
要改的：请帮改文法，把词语变得更好.....
Firstly, the government should improve the welfare of the grassroots to alleviate the gap between the rich and the poor. The current welfare policies made by the government, such as the reduction of public housing rents, electricity bills and the release of additional CSSA payments, although the solution of the poor meet the urgent needs of little help, but the long-term but then out of poverty. Therefore, the government should change its land policy to build more public housing and public housing, and provide the public with basic housing needs. In addition, the government should implement a universal retirement protection, long-term preparation for the public, and adjusted upwards the amount of the minimum wage will help to enhance the income of the lower class.
1.内个~中心思想是公民福利问题么?.
2.而且就开头用了一个,你后面没承接啊
3.Althoug \but 不能连用啊
The government is expected to focus more on the well-being of lower class of the society as to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.In addition to that,the current walfare polices made by the government,including the reduction of public housing rents and the electricity bill,have won initial success.But in the long run,there is still a long way for the government to go.Here are some unmature advice of me.
呃,后面的写的挺好,我还不及你..
2.而且就开头用了一个,你后面没承接啊
3.Althoug \but 不能连用啊
The government is expected to focus more on the well-being of lower class of the society as to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.In addition to that,the current walfare polices made by the government,including the reduction of public housing rents and the electricity bill,have won initial success.But in the long run,there is still a long way for the government to go.Here are some unmature advice of me.
呃,后面的写的挺好,我还不及你..